Wonderful Writing
Room 7 are GREAT authors and illustrators.
We are learning how to add detail to our writing and to extend our ideas. We are continuing to make our writing interesting to a reader by adding exciting adjectives and verbs.
We are great at spelling and always try to write the hard words by sounding them out.
Writing ExamplesBy Tyrone, Devontae, and Rachel
LostWe are learning to extend our stories by adding more detail.
One day I went in the forest. My mum said "You're not allowed to go into the forest." When I went to look for a way home I met a bear. The bear said "Who are you?" I said "I'm just a little boy"
Noah
One day I was sitting down on a log and a wolf came and said "What's the matter missy moo?"
"I'm looking for my mum" I said.
"Can you show me the way
please ?"
So the wolf showed me the way home.
Tania
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